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Thursday, August 23, 2007

ROLLAR COASTER.

The ascending railings of the roller coaster, made my heart beat faster just by looking at it. The height of the thin railings, and the delicate shape looked as though the seats were going come soaring out. I laid my feet on to the tiny step of the roller coaster. And saw the sickness coming my way just by looking at the previous riders step out of their seats, sours looks spread across their faces. I buckled up myself tightly, shifting around on the smooth leather, getting comfortable. The noise of the metal crashing filled my ears, and the vibration from the base stormed up the soles of my feet. I gripped tightly on to the metal bar in front of me, my hands already sweating from the pressure of my grip. The seats started to move slowly under the roof, then sunlight stroke my eyes. I felt myself bending lower and lower. Then the cold air punched my right in the face. The soothing and fresh air made my ears stretch back, and my cheeks felt as though they were going to burst apart. My heart sank cold. I saw millions of people, the size of ants from my view, moving around the campus. I saw the panoramic view from the top of the roller coaster. Other riders of the roller coaster screamed on the top of their lungs, and screams plugged my ears. The sides of the view blurred my eyes, and made them water because of the dust. It was as though the world around me was spinning. Loud blows of air made my ears chill. And I felt my spine tickle its way up. When I screamed, the sickening taste struck my taste buds. It felt as though small particles of dust were swimming back strokes on my tongue. My throat became rough, and felt as though I had choked on rapid air. The roller coaster stopped, and darkness filled my eyes, once again.

2 comments:

Avi said...

The ascending railings of the roller coaster, made my heart beat faster just by looking at it. The height of the thin railings, and the delicate shape looked as though the seats were going come crashing out. I laid my feet on to the tiny step of the roller coaster. I saw the sickness coming my way just by looking at the previous stunned riders step out of their seats, sour looks spread across their faces. I buckled up myself tightly, shifting around on the smooth leather, getting comfortable. The noise of the metal crashing filled my ears, and the vibration from the base stormed up the soles of my feet. I gripped tightly on to the metal bar in front of me, my hands already sweating from the pressure of my grip. The seats started to move slowly under the roof, the sunlight burnt my eyes. I felt myself falling lower and lower. Then the cold air punched me right in the face. The soothing and fresh air made my ears stretch back, and my cheeks felt as though they were going to burst apart. My heart sank low. I saw millions of people, the size of ants from my view, moving around the amusement park. I saw the panoramic view from the top of the roller coaster. Other riders of the roller coaster screamed on the top of their lungs, and screams plugged my ears. The polluted air blinded me as we went down what seemed to be Mount Everest. It was as though the world around me was spinning. Loud blows of air made a vacuum in my ears. I felt my spine tickle its way up. It felt as though small particles of dust were swimming back strokes on my tongue. My throat became rough, and felt as though I had choked fear. The roller coaster stopped, and darkness filled my eyes, once again.

Ju said...

This rollercoaster thing reminded me a lot of my experience riding it. Fantastique details!
p.s. great minds think alike! :D I also used the phrase; they screamed to the top of their lungs.